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smokingintheshop

2 months ago (edited) Report

I liked it. Your description and prose is really nice. I gotta admit though, I thought she was a skeleton the whole time from 'hood around her skull', until I reread it. Also, as a smoker w/ friends who vape, an actual vape fiend would've dug through that trash can unashamedly. I have seen my buddy fish his vape out of worse lmfao.

thanks for the advice, I'll work on it.

by Jasmine Boba Tea; 2 months ago (edited); Report

hellokittyisnt4kids

2 months ago (edited) Report

i acc liked it, its so goodd

u really good at writing btw XD

ty, but i need to work on not using the purple prose while writing and get used to doing more lyrical writing.

by Jasmine Boba Tea; 2 months ago (edited); Report