ANNIHILATION
In 2004, something happened.
Nobody can agree on what it was. Some people say it was an accident. Others say it was a crime. The official records contradict each other, and the people who were there either refuse to speak about it or disappear soon afterward.
The only thing everyone remembers is a boy named Naeda.
Years later, he enters middle school carrying a quiet sadness that nobody understands. His classmates avoid him at first, then mock him, then begin treating him as though he isn't human at all. Teachers notice it, but look away. Friends slowly become strangers.
Naeda never fights back.
But strange things begin happening around him.
People wake up in the middle of the night with the feeling that someone is standing in their room. They hear faint breathing from dark corners. If they gather the courage to look, nothing is there.
If they listen carefully, the sound suddenly stops.
As if whatever was making it realized they were awake.
The first rumors spread through the city. Students whisper about a tall figure that stands behind certain people. Security cameras malfunction whenever it appears. Dogs refuse to walk near places it has been seen.
The figure becomes known only as REDEMPTION.
Nobody knows what it wants.
The terrifying part is that it never chooses people at random.
Every person who claims to have seen it has one thing in common:
Their lives are connected to something horrible.
As the years pass, the boundary between Naeda's private suffering and the outside world begins to disappear. People who have never spoken to him start having the same nightmares. Entire neighborhoods refuse to sleep with their lights off. Families move away without explanation.
Then the sky changes.
For three days, a pale grey-white horizon stretches across the world. The sun still rises, but it feels wrong, as though daylight itself has become sick.
Birds stop singing.
Children begin talking to empty spaces.
People start claiming they can see someone watching them from windows that should be empty.
No one can prove any of it.
The government dismisses it as mass hysteria.
Then the disappearances begin.
Not violent. Not bloody.
People simply leave a room and are never seen again.
Their belongings remain untouched.
Their phones stay on.
Their dinner is still warm.
It is as though reality itself quietly forgot they ever existed.
Maiu, one of the few people who truly knew Naeda, eventually admits something she kept secret for years.
Back in middle school, she once found him alone.
He was staring into nothing.
She called his name several times before he answered.
For a moment, she thought he was talking to someone standing behind him.
There was nobody there.
But when Naeda finally turned around, he asked her a question she never forgot.
"Can you see it too?"
As the truth slowly unfolds, people realize REDEMPTION is not destroying the world.
It is revealing it.
Human suffering does not disappear.
It leaves marks.
Most people carry scars that fade with time.
But sometimes a life becomes tied to something so terrible that the wound never closes.
And when that happens...
the wound begins looking for other people.
The greatest horror isn't that Naeda brought REDEMPTION into the world.
It's that REDEMPTION may have always existed, waiting for someone whose pain was deep enough to let everyone else finally see it.
By the end, people stop asking who the monster is.
They start asking a far worse question.
If one person's suffering can spread to everyone...
...how many other people are carrying something that hasn't awakened yet?
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Jecca
I really like this concept!! is it basically their demons? or is it a new type of animal?
it’s more of i want to say a supernatural being or a “god”
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PART 2 WHEN??
worry not my friend, there’s 12 volumes
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