trying to get back into the swing of writing songs after spending like a year focusing solely on bass playing. came up with this which ended up pretty cool, even if im a bit rusty. doesn't even have a name yet and i have no idea what its about :P would appreciate some feedback
https://on.soundcloud.com/pG864Pyh2WMcEXwVJu
lyrics:
i gave all i had to you
from waist down there's a double life
secrets that are just too convenient to use
in this house i can see your light
never gonna be good for me
never gonna see the things that i dont wanna see
things i wanna keep
never gonna be a sight to see for sore eyes that won't blink until you bleed
where'd you wanna be several years from now?
waiting around for the heart to do its bloody work
or turn it around
two sitting clowns pretending they know how the wind should blow
how the wind should blow
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d3x
not my genre so i cant give the best critique but damn ur voice!! those ad libs are so smooth yumm. i also like that last verse the lyrics sound like u do know what the song is about maybe, very introspective me likey