I’m writing this book and I need to know if it’s good enough sooooo I know it’s long I just want to know if anyone would actually want to read it I’ve started it yesterday and I need opinions!!!!!
she was perfect. She was laying across her Double bed legs raised in the air reading what looked like twilight. The quiet humm of vampires will never hurt you by my chemical romance was faded into the background. I sat cross legged sat against the wooden headboard I had her acoustic guitar in my hands the thin cool strings lightly touching my finger tips. Her room was a mess but it all worked we where both sat on her bed next to us was an open window the warm night breeze settling in. She had posters that covered her walls I can still remember the my chemical romance one I drew her as a little birthday present. Her black cat called Helena was sat by the window looking out into the night. Her name was Lilith she had raven black hair that had hints of colour from when she had dyed it so much her pale face suited her dark eyes and deep eyeliner. She reminded me a lot of lynz way. I was Gerald which was ironic because my chemical romance was my favourite band. Lilith always called me gee for short and after Gerard way who apparently I reminded her of. The room was silent apart from Helena’s occasional meow and my guitar playing. A message lit up on her phone it was her friend or so she said she didn’t seem to like him
Jake: what are you doing
The message disappeared Lilith ignoring it completely she groaned loudly eating down her book and staring at the phone screen.
“If you don’t like him block him” I said looking up from the guitar and to her pretty face
“I can’t he’ll get pissed off” she wined coming over to sit next to me leaving her book completely abandoned. I looked at her for a long time her head resting on my shoulder
“So?” I asked a grin creeping on my face she looked at me a sarcastic annoyed expression on her face. I didn’t like any of her friends I thought they where all quite boring and she knew.
“If I block him no one will go near me thinking I’m insane or something” she complained pressing a pillow on her face.
”well don’t strangle yourself leave that for later” I joked pulling the pillow from her face she sat there for a moment the world slowed down or at least ours did. My chemical romance playing in the background warm breeze flowing in the was the perfect time to tell her. Our moment was interrupted but the opening of her door in stormed her sister holding was looked like a blush
“What the fuck have you done to my blush!” She shouted making Helena jump and so did i. Lilith looked at me them her sister a sarcastic smile on her face
“Do I look like I use blush kitty?” She asked still smirking. I had never been for Liliths house before or seen her family for that matter her parents where out and it was only me Liliths little sister kitty. Kitty had seemed to completely forgot about her blush and turned to me. She was nothing like her sister she was blonde had fake tan and was wearing what u can only describe as the most boring thing in the world.
“Who’s he?” She demanded pointing an accusing finger at me she was still stood in the doorway one hand on her hips holding the blush and the other still pointing at me. Lilith rolled her eyes and didn’t answer just walked up to the door and slammed it shut.
“I think she likes me” I joked smiling siting up and placing the guitar against the wall making sure it wouldn’t fall
“Oh yea she loves you” she smiled back retaking her place near to me.
“So what are you going to do about that Jake guy” I asked enjoying her annoyed reaction to my question
“Ahhhh I don’t knoww” she sighed exasperated.
“Wanna go for a walk we can got the the cemetery I know you like it their”
I mentioned holding her cold pale hand in mine
“I would love that” she said and let go of my hand to grab her wired headphones she always shared while we walked.
We walked out through the front door not without getting an angry glare from kitty to me she was watching love iland and was somehow more orange. We were greeted by the cozy dark night and I put one of the headphones in my ear and the sound of early sunsets over monroeville blasting through. The cemetery was colder than the wrest of the small town the church stood proudly covering the half the moon. We found an old bench covered in bird poo I have Lilith the clean (er) side. The moon lit up her face and the graves shining a bright light over the cemetery. Lilith was fiddling with her jewellery and biting her nails what was she so anxious about. We sat close for a few minutes and ever so slowly she rested her head on my shoulders agin some of her hair covering her face. She hummed along to the slow melody of drugstore perfume by Gerard way and ever so slowly agin I lay my head on top of hers closing my eyes. My ear stung a bit because of the wired headphones digging into my ear but I didn’t care. This was it the moment to tell her but what would she say would she love me to..
Kk thank you for reading bye
~PUMPKIN PIE MF~
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