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okay so this is an update on this: https://friendrewind.com/forum/topic.php?id=3034


i fleshed it out more and added more characters, i also aged them up a bit to be young adults, around 18-21. i'm probably going to have them go to college and feeling alienated other than having eachother.


anyways, the main characters of George and Jackson return here, George I want to make a bit of a self-insert, his personality is going to mostly be the same because he was already based a bit of me. jackson however is pretty much unchanged.


and for the new characters: i haven't made designs of them yet but i have an idea of what most of them look like.


i'm just gonna copy paste everything from a document i made for the cartoon. if any of you guys have any questions or advice on the characters let me know:

Seth Connor: Stoic, soft-spoken, and over 6 feet tall. He often has a yes-man attitude and doesn’t talk much at all. When he does speak he is often blunt and monotone, but is also quite sensitive, and very rarely ever speaks about things on his mind.


Jackie Blume: A “gamer girl”, chronically online and cusses a lot. She's very loud, overconfident and has a big ego, but she can be nice to people. Often spends time playing shooter games, but still enjoys being around with friends. Immature, a bit of a wiseass, but can be friendly.


Destiny Abbey: A scene girl, obsessed with early 2010’s internet culture. Often really bubbly and nice, but she often comes off as annoying towards others. Regardless, she tries to be supportive and is very caring. She can be quiet though when people feel like she’s too much.


Brody Rockaway: Big into 1980’s-90’s pop culture and good at drumming, he is often quiet at first but he’s very passionate about his hobbies and interests and is very relaxed typically, but he’s also very reckless and immature.


Mr. O’Wingly: The middle aged manager of “The Chicken Wing” which is a chicken restaurant where Ethan and Jackson work. He disapproves of Ethan and Jackson's antics, but doesn't want to fire them as he views them as good workers. He is some-what no-nonsense, and views his business as important, but he also legitimately cares about Ethan and Jackson.


Giovanni Parte: Ethan’s grandfather who is in his 90s and was born in Italy. He is very senile and forgetful, and due to his age he often comes off as rude, but deep down he legitimately cares about Ethan’s well-being and care.


Copper: Jackson’s pet rock.


and one more thing: i think i'm going to be changing the artstyle. my initial plan was to animate it frame by frame in google slides, but since i got adobe flash professional to work i think it would be better to migrate to there. in turn this means the artstyle will probably be quite different. when i do made artwork of any of the characters i'll be sure to upload them on here somewhere.


but yes, let me know what y'all think and whatever constructive criticism you may have


Just a tip, the text is all black so you might want to change it to white or something to be visible in dark mode (idk how it is in light mode so maybe something like green or red would work better)

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@KT_Roza33 is it better now? i tried to add a highlight to the part talking about the characters

@stevee actually yeah way better, highlighting was genius so it works for both screens 

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