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such skill, noteworthy. the repetition of the subjective pronoun, however, is...unrefined. |
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such skill, noteworthy. the repetition of the subjective pronoun, however, is...unrefined. |
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omg thank you!! and unrefined is a good word for it, yeah. i think it works better out loud, since it's a building repetitive sound, but it's also kind of raw and angry in a way that suits the rough nature of the wording!! everything has a time and place. i'll share something a little more eloquent next :]]
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ur welcome, and I like that tone of anger to it, really looking forward to the next one
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