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Maybe after getting her fangs, her original guide betrays her somehow and she’s forced to revert back to her old instincts and kill them in the end. Her new friends can’t look at her the same anymore,Then she voluntarily goes back to her castle or voluntarily steps into the sunrise.

ok so you're liking the way the story is going and the idea of it but you dont want it to follow the standard vampire books. if you want them to go down a bad path but not necessarily like continuing the cycle by turning them into vampires just a suggestion but you could have her realise what they're going to make her do she could refuse it and maybe get exiled and you can make them go through some negative development from the exile?