So, ive got draft one of chapter one of my self inserted phm fic, butttt. should i share it with y'all? id like ideas, criticism (Kindly), and just errors you find!!
i also have to start reading the book again, as i am on chap 4. and my brain needs more info on how the ship and its electronics, plus Astrophage works. so, i do not explode. as well as the governments (book) and its branches, as my yumesona was taken when they were young, into a lab, to be watched and monitored for their smarts.
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