the candle wax melts
forever as you lay
the floor of your room
how comfy may i say
the books remain
unread by you
clothes stay unworn
this place, how blue
what could have been
such a great time
we will never know
what if you could climb
above all your struggles
above everything that hurts
above the skies
now there you lie
this is a poem made by me. its not very good ill admit but i wanted to express my feelings and thoughts so i thought id write and share it anyway. let me know what you guys think of it please.
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Street Angel
You did awesome
tysm!!
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Gary
Great job (:
thank you!
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I don't believe in good or bad when it comes to making art. It's the making it that matters, and expressing something. So it's the best thing and I'm really happy to get to read your brain like a creep.
thank you!!
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