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TWIN THIS IS SO INTERESTING!! i absolutely loved your writing style and how you do the storytelling!!1!! especially those parts: "Their existence burned away with the building itself. " "We would find each other in the heart of the city, at a place brighter than the sun, where we could eat all the chocolate-strawberry crêpes we wanted." p.s.: made me want chocolate-strawberry crêpes too "Despite my memory, and despite the world pretending we did not exist any longer. My life was proof we did. I was alive, and I had a duty to find them again. I had vowed to fulfill our dreams of becoming ordinary children. Vowed to reunite us all. " i mean, this has insane potential. i know i'm just repeating myself but your writing's wonderful!! also!! any updates to the story? :]] |
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PLEASE WRITE MORE I'M SO INVESTED IN THIS STORY Do you have a direction or plan for it? THANK YOU ILL TRY :3 I do have a general plan for it but i keep changing it every time I write unfortunately The struggle is soooo real I've been having the same issue w my story ideas <\33 Yeaa and i feel like theres no real solution to it other than just being satisfied with what you have😭 |
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this is wonderful writing that hooked me instantly just from the start. keep working through your writers block u got this!! |
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AH THANK YOU SO MUCHHH :] I haven’t been writing much but your words definitely make me want to continue! And you should def get the crepes lol!!
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